Bradley Patterson's Blog (2)

Here is a paper I wrote about the new Army Experience Centers popping up on the east coast. It is illustrating some of the reasons these new centers are beneficial for the Army, and how they are not nearly as detremental as many of the protestors who have been holding demonstrations may think. I hope you agree with me, and if you do not, I hope I can start reshaping your opinion. Most of all, I hope you are entertained and enjoy the reading.…

So, I wrote this little essay in my English 101 class a few weeks ago and I'd like to know what you guys think of it. It is an account of a firefight in Zabol Province, Afghanistan back in 2005. The essay was limited to 1,200 words so it is a bit short, but should be entertaining nonetheless.

Let me know how you feel about it or if you have any tips for improvement. Enjoy.…