The official Sebastian Junger community
So, I wrote this little essay in my English 101 class a few weeks ago and I'd like to know what you guys think of it. It is an account of a firefight in Zabol Province, Afghanistan back in 2005. The essay was limited to 1,200 words so it is a bit short, but should be entertaining nonetheless.
Let me know how you feel about it or if you have any tips for improvement. Enjoy.